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05-01-2005, 01:15 PM | #2 |
The pizza king of kansas
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Well at least i'd written better then fatlock.
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05-01-2005, 01:19 PM | #3 | |
For The Glory Of The City
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05-01-2005, 01:27 PM | #4 |
King Shit of **** Mountain
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If it helps any, you feel shitty because alcohol is a diuretic and put you in a volume depleted state, which caused your meninges (lining of the brain) to pull away from your calvarium.
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05-01-2005, 02:26 PM | #5 | |
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05-01-2005, 07:03 PM | #6 | |
Scott Pioli
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My best advice to you if you are seriously interested in making this your career is to take some grammar classes somewhere. I'm sure you can find them at a local college. I like you on this board a whole lot, but you need to be realistic in your goals. Being a writer isn't something you just wake up one day and decide on. If you want to do it, you need to take the classes and buy some books on grammar, tense, spelling, punctuation, formating, etc... |
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05-01-2005, 07:11 PM | #7 |
I'll be back.
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Nut, you can't write (for now, don't know if it can be corrected), but you have more desire than me. I have the ability but lack the desire. Be proud of that, at least.
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05-01-2005, 01:28 PM | #8 |
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this thread is own.
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05-01-2005, 01:45 PM | #9 |
When a nightmare becomes real
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Drank taqulia and beer and feel likem shit. I hate ****ing texas fans and ksu will be that damn good. Also wish people would email head of scout.com and get my job back
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05-01-2005, 02:43 PM | #10 |
oxymoron
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Hey, Phil, need an honest answer here: do pink socks go with yellow golf shirts?
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05-01-2005, 02:54 PM | #11 | |
Wheeeeee!!!
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Hmmm ... this thread was moving right along for a bit ... until ...
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05-01-2005, 03:01 PM | #12 | |
MY LITTLE #15
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Damn! And I thought that was usually my job. Who knew? |
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05-01-2005, 03:04 PM | #13 |
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'nut,
Some of us here are writers, not to mention editor, etc. We haven't b.s.'ed you about what it takes to communicate efectively. I recommended two books that are considered sacred texts for aspiring writers. If you don't take us seriously when we advise you, why should we take you seriously when you can't deal with criticism? Get the Strunk & White book, "Elements of Style" and the AP Stylebook. You'll be glad you did. Then you'll be able to punctuate it properly when you call me a pompous asshole. |
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05-01-2005, 03:07 PM | #14 | |
MY LITTLE #15
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Ahh, edited the "set" to "get" before I could correct it. Missed the misspelling of "effectively" though. |
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05-01-2005, 03:23 PM | #15 | |
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