Thread: My Ode to Chiefsplanet
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Old 04-15-2009, 07:57 AM   #24
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There's no chorus, and no bridge. You need a chorus and a bridge. That's all verses.

I give you an "I" (for incomplete) until the chorus/bridge are put in.
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